A hour or two later Kris began to complain about all the walking we were doing. Kotone was now ahead of us because she had the map.That's it. It is weird right? Haha. I found a piece of art on DA that kind of fits Kris, Kotone, and Jack.
"Come on guys this is nothing!"
"Psh, by nothing you mean the longest walk in our lives."
I nodded my head in agreement with Kris. I was tired too eventually having Quil just rest on my head.
"Well hello there young travelers."
A man appeared from the inside of a house we were passing by. I waved at him while both Kotone and Kris ingored him.
"would you three like some water? It is very hot out here."
Kotone and Kris continued walking, but I stopped.
"Sounds good!"
Kris and Kotone both stopped and turned around. Kotone signaled for me to come on.
"Come on Jack, we are really close to Violet City. We can get water there."
"But we can have wat-."
I was interputed by Kris, who began to scream at the old man.
"WE DON'T WANT ANY OF YOU DIRTY OLD WATER YOU PERVERT. WE ARE NOT STUPID YOU KNOW?"
The old man looked like he was having a heart attack. I ran to help him as he fainted. Kotone moaned and came to help the man into his house.
"Kris I hope you feel good, because you probably made this guy die!"
Kris folded her arms, "He died a pervert."
The man didn't really die, but just fainted. His name was Mr. Pokemon and Kris said that sounds like the name of a child predator but I just rolled my eyes.
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I doubt I will have them fight over Jack, but they have their own little fights. :3

I feel guilty for not commenting here more, anyway your story sounds interesting... I can't say much than that, I find I have a hard time articulating literary reviews.
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